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读后感的评语教师怎么评(篇1)

Jane. Love living in a parents, sponsor, grew up under the environment of treatment with peers, aunt abandon, cousin contempt, cousin insults and beating of a child this is the dignity of the ruthless trample, but perhaps because it all, Jane. Love and faith of infinite indomitable spirit, a kind of inner personality can win.

In rochester, she never because he is a teacher and the family status meanness, but that they feel inferior is equal. Should not because she is a servant, but not respected by others. Also because of her integrity, noble and pure heart, no pollution, secular society for the shock, and rochester her as a spiritual and equality in the conversation, and slowly and deeply in love with her.

Jane eyre itself to us is a kind of simplified, is a fanpiaoguizhen, is a kind of pursuit of whole heart feeling, is a kind of simplified feelings and neglected, it is like a cup of water, purify every reader's heart, also cause readers, especially female readers

读后感的评语教师怎么评(篇2)

Rolling the Yangtze river east a mill, the waves are gone all heroes. Exciting, the third time I open the classical literary classics of The Three Kingdoms \.

The story is the main content of the wisdom and brave in turn to launch, but I think that wisdom is always better than brave. For example: in the west, KongMingYong KongChengJi scare the sima yi of one hundred and fifty thousand troops led. This example for infinite in number.

But in the story also has \wisdom not delimit stratagem, brave enemy, the improper doesn't take the pen, wu fixed gun\. Like han room LiuChan, gaily all day, ignore the palace, and is willing to give the shu, finally had staged let one of sneer at things, ran. Who would have thought of a country's rulers can make such a ShiYiSuYi things to come?

Foolhardy, the big enemy be current, the only desperate battle. Lyu3 bu4, YanLiang are typical example: if BaiMenLou obey the counselor in lyu3 bu4 idea, why should be hanged on the city gate cao? If YanLiang put in hebei things and liu bei guan yu clearly, where as for the chop down by guan yu is nothing?

If in the three countries on the strongest wage, a little too much. Cao cao is a unique way, sima yi is more YongBingRuShen. But both have their own weakness: cao cao suspicious, sima yi too dangerous. Besides shu, the will is various ge bright. His prodigious wit, skilled BingZhen, all let posterity alike. And like chicken, concubines Victoria, seo young pang tong accidental sugarcane and so on some characters, but I think all not equal to the bore is clear. Wu, a occupy sanjiang county of six nation, can calculate on a strategy, also is the week yu, young period of the week yu will read books, proficient in formation. After some hard work, and finally, when the very big paper, the President marines. But he is too too jealous, dead at all twenty-six.

From these characters and state we can see that the importance of one's character. Character relationship with success.

Each people all have own goal, as long as dependable walk good for success in the process of each section of the road, believe that success will not far. When we looked at others envy success, often ignored him on the road to success pay difficultly. Like bing xin said: the success of flower. People got only act she present mingyan! But when her yaren, soak the struggle leiquan, a sacrifice xueyu blood rain!

读后感的评语教师怎么评(篇3)

Jane Eyre, is a poor but aspiring, small in body but huge in soul, obscure but self-respecting girl. After we close the covers of the book, after having a long journey of the spirit, Jane Eyre, a marvelous figure, has left us so much to recall and to think:

We remember her goodness: for someone who lost arms and blinded in eyes, for someone who despised her for her ordinariness, and even for someone who had hurt her deeply in the past.

We remember her pursuit of justice. Its like a companion with the goodness. But still, a virtuous person should promote the goodness on one side and must check the badness on the other side.

We remember her self-respect and the clear situation on equality. In her opinion, everyone is the same at the Gods feet. Though there are differences in status、in property and also in appearance, but all the human being are equal in personality.

We also remember her striving for life, her toughness and her confidence

When we think of this girl, what she gave us was not a pretty face or a transcendent temperament that make us admire deeply, but a huge charm of her personality.

Actually, she wasnt pretty, and of course, the ordinary appearance didnt make others feel good of her, even her own aunt felt disgusted with it. And some others even thought that she was easy to look down on and to tease, so when Miss Ingram met Jane Eyre, she seemed quite contemptuous, for that she was obviously much more prettier than the plain and ugly governess. But as the little governess had said: Do you think, because I am poor, obscure, plain, and little, I am soulless and heartless? You think wrong! This is the idea of equality in Jane Eyres mind. God hadnt given her beauty and wealth, but instead, God gave her a kind mind and a thinking brain. Her idea of equality and self-respect impress us so much and let us feel the power inside her body.

In my mind, though a persons beauty on the face can make others once feel that one is attractive and charming, if his or her mind isnt the same beautiful as the appearance, such as beauty cannot last for, when others find that the beauty which had charmed them was only a falsity, its not true, they will like the person no more. For a long time, only a persons great virtue, a noble soul, a beautiful heart can be called as AN EVERLASTING BEAUTY, just as Kahill Gibran has said, that Beauty is a heart enflamed and a soul enchanted。 I can feel that how beauty really is, as we are all fleshly men, so we cant distinguish whether a man is of nobleness or humbleness, but fleshly men, so we cant distinguish whether a man is of nobleness or humbleness, but as there are great differences in our souls, and from that, we can know that whether a man is noble or ordinary, and even obscure, that is, whether he is beautiful or not.

Her story makes us thinking about life and we learn much from her experience, at least, that is a fresh new recognition of the real beauty.

读后感的评语教师怎么评(篇4)

Jane Eyre, is a poor but aspiring, small in body but huge in soul, obscure but self-respecting girl. After we close the covers of the book, after having a long journey of the spirit, Jane Eyre, a marvelous figure, has left us so much to recall and to think:

We remember her goodness: for someone who lost arms and blinded in eyes, for someone who despised her for her ordinariness, and even for someone who had hurt her deeply in the past.

We remember her pursuit of justice. Its like a companion with the goodness. But still, a virtuous person should promote the goodness on one side and must check the badness on the other side.

We remember her self-respect and the clear situation on equality. In her opinion, everyone is the same at the Gods feet. Though there are differences in status、in property and also in appearance, but all the human being are equal in personality.

We also remember her striving for life, her toughness and her confidence

When we think of this girl, what she gave us was not a pretty face or a transcendent temperament that make us admire deeply, but a huge charm of her personality.

Actually, she wasnt pretty, and of course, the ordinary appearance didnt make others feel good of her, even her own aunt felt disgusted with it. And some others even thought that she was easy to look down on and to tease, so when Miss Ingram met Jane Eyre, she seemed quite contemptuous, for that she was obviously much more prettier than the plain and ugly governess。 But as the little governess had said: Do you think, because I am poor, obscure, plain, and little, I am soulless and heartless? You think wrong! This is the idea of equality in Jane Eyres mind. God hadnt given her beauty and wealth, but instead, God gave her a kind mind and a thinking brain. Her idea of equality and self-respect impress us so much and let us feel the power inside her body.

In my mind, though a persons beauty on the face can make others once feel that one is attractive and charming, if his or her mind isnt the same beautiful as the appearance, such as beauty cannot last for, when others find that the beauty which had charmed them was only a falsity, its not true, they will like the person no more. For a long time, only a persons great virtue, a noble soul, a beautiful heart can be called as AN EVERLASTING BEAUTY, just as Kahill Gibran has said, that Beauty is a heart enflamed and a soul enchanted。 I can feel that how beauty really is, as we are all fleshly men, so we cant distinguish whether a man is of nobleness or humbleness, but fleshly men, so we cant distinguish whether a man is of nobleness or humbleness, but as there are great differences in our souls, and from that, we can know that whether a man is noble or ordinary, and even obscure, that is, whether he is beautiful or not.

Her story makes us thinking about life and we learn much from her experience, at least, that is a fresh new recognition of the real beauty.

读后感的评语教师怎么评(篇5)

1. 语言朴素,中心明确,构思合理,行文层次清楚。

2. 能把人物内心活动写得十分生动,的确难能可贵,给人留下了深刻的印象。

3. 文章头尾照应,中心明确,结构完整。

4. 文章有理有据,说服力强,突出人物个性,上下文过渡自然,条理清晰,首尾照应,结尾点题,突出中心思想。

5. 作者对„观察仔细,描写细腻,语言生动活泼,表现手法富有新意。

6. 全文语言朴实,结构自然。„文章结构严谨,首尾呼应。

7. 文中描绘的„清新活泼,欢快明朗。字里行间跳动着的童心,使文章也有了生命力。

8. 文章虽短,但叙述生动。描写细腻,生活气息浓厚,遣词造句准确传神。

9. 文章最后揭示中心之句,实属点晴之笔,概括之语,短促而有力。

10. 通过仔细观察,采用了优美的语言把校园的春天绘声绘色地描述了出来,文章虽短但不显单调,语言通俗但不失风趣。

11. 对人物的语言,神态,动作等,进行精心细腻的描绘,这是本文的一大特色。结尾令人饱含期待与热情,言已尽,意犹未了。

12. 文章将„写得细致入微,字里行间透露出阳光般的温暖,使文章的主题自然而然升华到了较高的境界。

13. 音乐是美的,而本文的语言同样优美。诗一般的语言梦一般的想象,多美啊!

14. 文章的“读”与“感”联系紧密,事例叙述行动,开头打动人心,具有真情实感。

15. 本文语言虽然并不华丽,但却极为准确生动,情感丰富而真实,读来津津有味。大量采用生活中的口语,使文章更显自然亲氏。结尾以„点明中尽,含蓄隽永,意味深长。

16. 这篇作文取材新颖,构思奇妙,语言生动活泼。字里行间透露出清新的生活气息和儿童情趣。

17. 文章按事情发展的顺序,记叙了„的事,语言比较流畅,层次较清楚,自始自终显得其乐融融。

18. 通篇文章语调轻松幽默,显得妙趣横生,读来令人爱不释手。

19. 语言活泼明快,富有情趣。故事虽平凡,感情却真挚,充沛,感人。文章结尾不落俗套,给人以欲还休的感觉。

20. 事例叙述得生动具体,人物的言行符合各自身份特点。可见你是个生活的有心人。文章来源于生活,因此语言虽然不怎样优美,但却真实有趣,写得入情入理。

读后感的评语教师怎么评(篇6)

I read a Defoe's of Robinson Crusoe. I am deeply attracted by the book, it lets me realize Robinson the surprising perseverance and indomitable spirit.

Robinson Crusoe is this book hero. In a maritime, Robinson on the ship in a desert island near reef and ship sailors and passengers are all drowned; but Crusoe one fortunately survived. The waves roll up the beach on him. In overcoming the initial pessimistic and despair, after that, he with his indomitable perseverance, and nature is launched heroic epic struggle. He depends on his own hands and wisdom, use guns and simple tools, self-reliance, self-reared land lived a desolate YeDao life. Through unremitting efforts, he not only have their own residence and furniture, and pasture, plantation, even have a pet. In such a terrible circumstances, could live in this way of life, is not easy, it is totally he relies on his perseverance and wisdom creates miracle.

Robinson Crusoe is a good at helping others, help him from a cannibal rescues the next captive, that day was Friday, so they named him Friday. From then on, Friday became his faithful partner and servants. Robinson also teach he learned to speak English. Soon, he was rescued from cannibals several captives, and together they labor, living together. Later, an English ship through the desert island, Crusoe help captain overpowered rebellion sailor, boat leave desert island and return to England and live a happy life. Robinson from castaway to return to England, this paragraph of time unexpectedly for 20 years.

Read this book, that I was deeply touched. A personal dire straits, unexpectedly can do this life is full of confidence, bravely facing life, create life, true is valuable. Make me realize that people regardless of when and where no matter much difficulty, can be difficult intimidated, bravely facing difficulties and overcome difficulties, and always maintain a positive, optimistic attitude, poised to face challenges and bad luck. Only in this way can we like Robinson, that is always a victory

读后感的评语教师怎么评(篇7)

After reading Robinson Crusoe, I have deep feelings. This book is basically written like Robinson, sailing and adventure, due to the storm big partners on board lost their lives, only Robinson was drifting to a deserted island. His distraught to face their own situation, and later Robinson found a water source, they can prevent wild animals where they set up a tent on the island, he encountered many difficulties and even disease, but he has overcome. He lived on the island is a twenty-eight years, and always have the risk of attack by wild beasts, no friends, do not have enough food, little hope of life,

However, Robinson has created a great miracle, he actually survived, it should be said of Robinson, died by virtue of a strong will and immense wisdom survived.

Robinson gave me the lesson that setbacks and failures, do not despair, and only did not despair, to be successful.

Yes ah, people's life there will be a lot of setbacks, the face of setbacks, you are only two: one to move forward, and the other one is back, Robinson chose the former.

Chu is a wise one phase has a strong will also infinite wisdom, outstanding military strategist, Sima Yi in the hundreds of thousands of troops to attack Chu fortresses, when faced with only a few hundred non-commissioned officers, then unable to reach Jiubing circumstances, Zhuge Liang is not a choice retreat, with his extraordinary wisdom clever to make empty city, fraudulently obtained Sima Yi is not a sense of attack had to retreat. Zhuge Liang rely solely on the strength of their own, they repulsed the Sima Yi is the tens of thousands of troops.

I believe that in our study, living and working in the strong will and infinite wisdom is essential, both are indispensable, they are a guarantee of success.

读后感的评语教师怎么评(篇8)

People, irrespective of when and where, no matter how difficult, do not be intimidated by the difficulties should be brave to face, and always maintain a positive, calm optimistic attitude, and challenges to face destiny. Only experienced hardships in order to truly become a strong man can do, like Robinson, is always a winner. We are not afraid of difficulties, as Robinson did, indomitable spirit, courage to face difficulties, not easily made failure, learn to be independent, autonomous life! Be a strong person.

读后感的评语教师怎么评(篇9)

1、你很善于抓住事物的特点进行具体描绘，展示xx，文笔间渗透情感。

2、这么端正的作业，一定下很大功夫！

3、今天我太高兴，因为看到你的作文！

4、内容生动丰富，语言新颖清爽，结构独特合理。

5、作业是巩固知识的必要途径，必须用心完成！

6、字里行间流露出的真情，让我感动！

7、骄兵必败！

8、全文清新秀逸，亲切委婉，朴素而不落俗淘，值得借见。

9、喜欢你的言语，朴素而富含哲理。推荐给大家！

10、文中对父亲的介绍是全面的：从外貌到内心，从工作到生活；对父亲的介绍又是有重点的：重在写父亲的感情。人物形象丰满、真实，富于生活气息。为这样的父亲自豪吧，再努力，不要辜负父亲的期望！

11、我想，你作业的时间调配可能需要调整，我们可以商量一下。

12、加油！超过别人！

13、这篇作文的主要特色是叙述具体，细节真实，描写生动，有真情实感，并运用比喻，拟人等修辞手法，把…写得非常传神，同时表达…对…的喜爱。

14、文章虽短，但叙述生动。描写细腻，生活气息浓厚，遣词造句准确传神。

15、本文是一篇较为成熟的叙事明理之作，文章以准确流畅的语言，展示实验的全过程，跌宕起伏，妙趣横生。小作者观察仔细，叙述时井然有序。

16、比喻句用得精当。加入古诗进行联想，富有韵味。

17、文章最后揭示中心之句，实属点晴之笔，概括之语，短促而有力。

18、你的文章如春雷般唤醒沉睡的大地，为新的一天增添新绿。

19、采用比喻，拟人等修辞手法，形象地写出…的美。这部分还可以展开写。以小见大，表现。

20、虽然写作对你来说并不是很喜欢的，但你却像蜗牛一样踏踏实实走好每一步，坚持写作，从不辍笔。你的精神着实令人钦佩，以你的个性定会闯出自己的一片天地。

21、这则笔记，让我明白做人的道理，谢谢你！

22、真是“下笔如有神”啊。看来你一定阅读大量的文学作品。内容如此丰富，更显示你的文学功底。只是如果把材料再按一定的逻辑顺序调整一下，此文会更精彩。

23、你是个聪明的孩子只要加油一定可以成功的。

24、是的，有时，一首歌也能给人很大的启迪！

25、文章的“读”与“感”联系紧密，事例叙述行动，开头打动人心，具有真情实感。

26、文章开头与结尾时的诗化语言，充满想象与韵律之美，令人愿读、爱读，不忍释手。

27、重点不太突出，犹如打水仗一般，水花四溅，就是找不着攻击的对象。

28、文章开头引人入胜，吸引读者。点面结合，使文章生动，具体，详略得当。

29、文章首尾呼应，语句简练，一针见血，点明主题。文章通过四季景色的描写，说明xx之美，照应开头。若能注意段落层次分明就更好。

30、别人能做到的，你也能！

31、通过仔细观察，采用合适的语言把…绘声绘色地描述出来，文章虽短但不显单调，语言通俗但不失风趣。

32、…以…开头，较有新意。前因后果娓娓道来。

33、不要叹息时间的消逝，要热情而执著地抓住它！

34、主题直接凸现于内容之中，明扼要，毫无赘意。

35、你的文章很有创意——用几何证明题的形式来完成构思。全文文学色彩很浓！

36、文章选材新颖，激起读者读下去的欲望。

37、全文语言生动准确，情节精彩曲折，仿佛将读者带进开心乐园，令人眉开眼笑。全文通俗易懂，趣味性强。

38、情境描写调动起悬念。

39、让大伙儿看到更出色的你！

40、先写“xx”，再写“xx”，又写“xx”，最后写“xx”，写作思路多么清晰，描写多么细腻，你看，用恰当的比喻，把“xx”写得形象，逼真。

41、全文语言朴实，结构自然。…文章结构严谨，首尾呼应。

42、文章对……的气氛渲染充分而恰到好处，对文章重点…作细腻而传神的刻画。立意高远，令人赞叹。

43、借景抒情，托物咏志，很特色。

44、“你把拔河比赛中的“长绳”比作“拿不定主意的孩子”，太贴切！比赛虽然失败，但你的作文却写得非常成功！如果作文结尾把自己失望的心情变成短短的几句启示，就更好！

45、作者对…观察仔细，描写细腻，语言生动活泼，表现手法富有新意。

46、文能怡情。不能把写作文当成自己的一项负担，而应该以积极的心态、细腻的笔触记录下自己的心路历程。

47、楼倩贝，你太不起！读着你写的作文，细细品味其中的好词佳句，老师简直不敢相信竟是小小年纪的你写的。楼倩贝，老师为你骄傲，希望你不断努力，用你的笔描绘出多彩的生活，多彩的世界！

48、细节描写颇具匠心。极富功底。

49、开头简洁自然，结构清晰，心理描写真实，体现出作者良好的语言驾驭能力。

50、共同努力，共同进步！

51、关心生活，关注社会。

52、读你的文章真是一种享受。首先是思想感情的愉悦，当然来自你文章深邃新鲜的立意。所谓“登山则情满于山，观海则意溢于海”，你是个生活的有心人，你用真情打动别人，这是你作文的最大成功。

53、过渡自然，每一段交待得很清楚。

54、叙述详细具体，细节描写生动逼真，人物个性鲜明突出，形象丰满，跃然纸上。

55、对“xx”和“xx”的描写很有特色，颇带童趣，令人耳目一新，“xx”这句古诗引用也很恰当，增强文章的表达效果。

56、文章按事情发展的顺序，记叙？的事，语言比较流畅，层次较清楚，自始自终显得其乐融融。

57、看你的作业，总能给我的教学带来启发。

58、结尾恰到好处地点明中心，语言朴实而含义深刻，耐人寻味。

59、你的汗水不会白流，你的努力也不会白费！

60、写得好，你是这样做得吗？做一只鹰！

61、坚持就是胜利。

62、注意观察具体事物，并展开合适的想象，这是的成功之处。文章融情于景，边绘景边抒情，善于运用打比方的手法，使文章形象生动。

63、对不起，这一段老师没有读明白，你愿意为老师再解释一下吗？谢谢你。

64、不失时机地运用排比的手法，从多方面说明事物的特征，既增强语势，又给读者留下非常深刻的印象。

65、作文中有一句不懂什么意思，就像你告诉我呼吸要用耳朵，我感到莫名其妙。

66、作者对？观察仔细，描写细腻，语言生动活泼，表现手法富有新意。

67、如许娟秀的`字迹，清晰严整的结构，不由给人以耳目一新的感觉，这一点老师真的应该向你学习。就让我们在今后的语文学习中互相促进好吗？

68、文能言声，我想文章正是你心灵的反映。人生的路途确实很曲折，也很漫长，但只要你努力执着地往前走，成功的桂冠必将属于你。

69、语言虽然并不华丽，但却极为准确生动，情感丰富而真实，读来津津有味。

70、详略安排不当，主次不够分明。

71、从外到内，介绍“xx”的特点，观察有顺序，也很细致，写得准确生动，调动多种感官，内容真切具体。

72、全文叙事集中，不枝不蔓，语言朴实流畅，感情真挚感人。

73、…特写镜头别开生面，情趣盎然。全文充满童心童趣，读来倍感亲切。

74、字要写正，不出格。

75、这部分参照课文中的例子，语言过于平板，可适当修改，使语言更生动。

76、中心不够明确，立意不够清晰。

77、全文节奏明快，语言清新，始终洋溢着诙谐与风趣，读来其乐无穷。

78、能够选择生活中具有典型意义的题材，事件的代表性较强。

79、对细节传神的刻画，恰恰相反到好处地揭示人物的内心世界，这是本文的成功之处。

80、情节波折性较强，于平常之中生意外，能引起读者的注意。

81、对人物形象缺乏多角度的刻画，只是选取某一狭窄的题材，片面地显现人物某一方面的性格特征。

82、文章很有说服力，也发人深思。从写作上来说，情节生动，文章有波澜，读起来深受教益。

83、文章融情于景，边绘景边抒情，善于运用打比方的手法，使文章生动具体。

84、下次要拿第一哦！

85、叙述自然生动、结构紧凑，衔接自然连贯，中心突出。

86、开头点题，用词很吸引人。

87、文章来源于生活，因此语言虽然不怎样优美，但却真实有趣，写得入情入理。

88、勤奋地学习，汇っ成功，你做到，我很高兴！

89、用列数字，举例子的方法，很形象。

90、把你的作业和××同学的交流，你们都会有收获！

91、文章将？写得细致入微，字里行间透露出阳光般的温暖，使文章的主题自然而然升华到较高的境界。

92、你没有认真完成！

93、…切合实际，蕴含着朴素而深刻的哲理，读来令人精神振奋，情绪激昂。

94、错别字太多啦，像烧饼上的芝麻一样，能不能争取把芝麻从烧饼上拍下来呢？

95、简单交待时间，地点和结果。

96、结尾似乎没有写完，应能与开头照应。观察细致，描写生动。

97、涉世不深的少年走近复杂的社会，这本身就是一种睿智。文章语言平实而柔和，描写很随意，似乎引领着读者在心灵的原野上漫步。不足是议论略感缺乏棱角。要知道，精粹的议论可起到画龙点睛的作用，会使你的文章更加深刻。继续练笔，你会更出色！

98、本文很好体现…的特点，深刻的主题与新颖的构思相得益彰。

99、文章开头交待得十分清楚，起到总领全文的作用。结尾处寥寥数语，显示作者探索科学奥秘的远大理想和坚定信心，催人奋进。

100、虽然选择生活中具有一定叙写价值的事件，但由于分析不透彻，挖掘不深，事件潜含的道理未能深刻地体现。

101、作者写出xx早晨的忙碌和充实，也写出xx早晨景色的美丽，结尾处“一年之计在于春，一日之计在于晨，在这美好的早晨，我们踏上人生的路程”，表达作者珍惜大好时光，走好人生之路的美好愿望。

102、给自己一个笑脸，你会发现，生活，完全不一样。

103、情节平直，毫无悬念，平铺直叙似记流水账。

读后感的评语教师怎么评(篇10)

作文批语有两种，一是眉批，二是总批。眉批是就作文某一方面具体予以启发，着重解决个别和局部的问题；总批是对全文作出评价，着重解决全局和整体的问题。可见，眉批是基础，是对学生进行更有针对性的细致的辅导，是提高学生思想认识和写作能力的重要一环。在作文批改中，眉批不可忽视，至关重要。结合自己作文教学的实践，就作文眉批的问题，笔者谈一下自己不成熟的看法：

指出字、词、句的正误优劣。如一篇作文有这样的句子：“我被老师诚恳的话激动了。”这“激动”一词显然用得不当，我在眉批写道：“应改‘激动’为‘感动’。”这样，便纠正了用词不当的错误。有的作文个别语句不通顺，也要在眉批中指出。如一篇作文中有这样一句：“在这次运动会上，开得热气腾腾。”我在眉批中写道：“这句缺主语，介宾短语不能充当主语，应把‘在’和‘上’删去。”对于作文中精彩优美的词句也应在眉批中予以肯定。如《诚实》一文中的几句：“我们玩得正欢，忽然‘啪’的一声，不知是谁把足球踢到了办公室的窗户上，把玻璃打坏了一块。”我在眉批写道：“先闻其声，后叙其事，形象生动。”

2.指出语句是否前后照应，层次脉络是否清晰。如《我的父亲》一篇作文中有这样一小段：“父亲离开我已经三年了，但那慈祥的面容，却时时浮现在我的脑海中。”我在眉批中写道：“这段过渡得很有必要，承上启下，使上下文衔接紧密。”这样点拨一下很有好

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